Obama Speech

I agree with the comments made. He changed the wording of those parts to make the speech more concrete. He gives names to be more specific and when he uses words like "we," to include that we are all in this together. Pretty much, those changes were good and used to give the feeling that he is talking to us rather than at us. He adds in about both republicans and democrats coming together to solve and issue. This was good because he gave emphasis and was more specific about what and who he was talking about. He adds in "I know," this was good because he was showing that he can see what is going on and hes not above us acting like he knows and just goes of random assumptions. Below in the singled out changes. It was better when it was revised. It gave the impression that the government isn't always interfering and they are letting things run their coarse but at times the government needs to step in when it truly believes something needs to change.