Obama's Speech

I feel tht Obama changed the way the speech was written to make it more persona and more "simplistic" to the hear. Alot of speeches in politics tends to include extra lengthy words and also use a certain language nt most understand. Bt by adding different words Such as using Teddy's name instead of saying "him" or "he", Its gives a better feel of who is being refered to, therefore making the listening a bit easier. I also feel he might hav cjaged the speech simply becuase Obama might hav noticed some common grmatical and essay type errors people normally make wen writing a lengthy speech. It is very common to miss things wen yu are the onlii one who reads & edits a paper tht yu urself hav written. A third reson as to way he my hav changed to speech is maybe he knew more up to date in formation the the topic at hand, and he felt tht those important facts should e added in. such as the second part of the first paragraph written in blue.