Obama

the reasons of Obama's correctional errors is because i think he was trying to make the paper a more personal paper. i really didnt see to many reasons why he changed things. the reason of me thinking he tried to make it more personal because in the paper he stated In 1935, when over half of our seniors could not support themselves and millions had seen their savings wiped away, there were those who argued that Social Security would lead to socialism, but the men and women of Congress stood fast, and we are all the better for it. basically i think he is trying to show that we the people didnt panic they stood there ground and it helped us as a nation. Also he stated in one paragraph that members of Congress -- Democrats and Republicans did not back down. They joined together so that all of us could enter our golden years with some basic peace of mind. this is saying how our elders to help us have what we have to today in the world. this paper is a personal paper to everyone. that's basically what i got out of the paper.